Rory (The Ghosts of Palladino, #1) by Ciye Cho


Rory (The Ghosts of Palladino, #1)
MOBI Rory (The Ghosts of Palladino, #1)
By Ciye Cho
Publication 08 April 2025
Number of Pages 347
Format Type Kindle Edition

Science fiction fantasy series Rory was feisty and determined to fight in the beginning and she lost all that gusto in the second part She made stupid decisions and I just stopped caring about her overall by the end And Martin was no better I actually never cared for him because I still don t know him Bad character development all around Almost nothing was resolved by the end and so many questions were left unanswered that I just had to give up caring for this book I just felt too frustrated with everything that happened that I didn t want to deal with any of it any The SnugglyThere really is no romance I guess Rory and Martin might have feelings for each other but I am still not sure Appropriate for a YA audience Final ThoughtsI will not be continuing this series I don t really care about the characters or what is going to happen next I still give props for the first half.

Science fiction fantasy series

She secretly plots to escape Palladino even though she has been told it is impossible There were a lot of things I didn t like about this book but there were also some things that I did I felt like there really wasn t enough character development Rory is thrown into this situation pretty early on in the book and I felt like I couldn t develop a connection to her character at all There are flashbacks with random characters thrown in that don t really make sense there are two flashbacks with a neighbor boy that she had a crush on but other than that his character has nothing to do with the rest of the story so it seem forced and out of place Also.

Pdf royal bank

And I loved her development through the book She s landed in Palladino not by choice so when she gets there she s pretty feisty and I loved that She has a sharp tongue and a great answer to everyone It was interesting seeing her relationship with the other girls who have been brought to Palladino Rory has had a very isolated life due to her mother home schooling her with little interaction with others Suddenly she finds herself surrounded by other girls her age and she s a bit of an outcast I also like her relationship with the skine a winged demon type creature Manny and the talking cat Cookie yes this book has talking cats A lot of Rory s previous life is told through flashbacks which I thought was a really effective technique I think there were some things just touched upon that I would like to know about.

Rory kramer

And there was a good sense that something bigger was going on I absolutely love Cho s writing which has the ability to suck you in and bring these magical places to life Rory has a talent for decorating cakes and I can t tell you how many times I got hungry whilst reading about it I could practically taste the icing The writing really added to that atmosphere when it came to Palladino as well because the descriptions were so vivid This was a truly unique and enjoyable read and a universe I m looking forward to get back to The climax to the story was very exciting and left me dying to find out what happens If you don t like ghost stories then you have to give this a try because it s a ghost story with a difference And if you like your fantasy whimsical and a little bit mad then don t miss this one. Rory mcilroy net worth Find books like this at TotalTeenFiction Rory The Ghosts of Palladino.

Science fiction fantasy series

Plot One thing that I loved about this book was the cover While I m not a huge fan of the color pink I kind of like the shimmering rainbow iridescence of the artwork The book however could only partially compete with the cover s splendor I had many issues with this book lack of a concrete plot dialogue that read strange a cat that busted out in Kung fu moves for no reason and had a strong desire to play hopscotch etc Rory could have been a good book but it was poorly executed. Rory feek response to daughter Rory is a someteen if her age was stated it wasn t made memorable enough for me age girl from Jacksonville Florida Or namely Avondale as she so often likes to announce Her mom has always warned her of demons and how they ll take her away if she goes out at night but Rory ignores the warnings and defies her This results in a demon attack leaving her mom hospitalized and crazy and Rory immensely guilty. Science fiction fantasy series From here the plot just goes all screwy First we see her fighting against prim and proper princessy schooling and then she suddenly changes her mind and tries to blend upon a demon s suggestion did I mention that some people call him Manny. Rory kennedy The latter half of the book shows her running errands for a demon lord actually he s a ghost so I m not sure where the demon title came from and trying to determine whether or not she should trust him. Rory feek response to daughter Herv Moreno was supposedly our antagonist Though I can t recall ever being told why Throughout the book everyone merely warns Rory to avoid him and we re given the general impression that he s no good Other than the random two or three attacks of his we re given next to no insight as to why he s evil. Young adult or young-adult Rory however seemed kind of wishy washy More like she wanted to be tough when she really wasn t She also whined a lot but that s people in general I suppose However I found her to be a confusing protagonist to follow and she didn t seem very realistic. Rory gallagher Overall I felt pretty let down by the cast Either they confused me and seemed to have than one personality or they were so flat and washed out that they were nothing but thin sheets of lined notebook paper. Rory feek new wife Characters 1 out of 5Setting Writing Style Okay I ll get this right out front The writing style stunk It could have been good but I get the impression that Cho was trying a bit too hard It was just repetitive and there was a ton of dialogue that seemed unrealistic. Rory kennedy Moving away from that I actually thought Cho did an excellent job with the setting While I found rainbows mermaids and bronze colored streets to be odd for a purgatory land filled with demons he did a great job painting a picture From talking to my brother about it he came to the conclusion that it was Dante s Inferno meets My Little Pony I m not so sure that description is true but I kind of like the sound. Rory kramer Setting Writing Style 3 out of 5Overall 2 out of 5 Not one I d really recommend but it s a safe read for most ages that can read MG As for the demons Not that scary or intimidating More like dark things with rainbows for wings If you re interested in purchasing you can buy Rory on . Rory kramer I received Rory from the author in exchange for an honest review As is probably obvious all opinions are my own and have no affiliation with the author or publisher Want to read reviews like this Stop on by Verbosity Book Reviews Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1 Rory was absolutely amazing I am a huge fan of the author s mermaid YA series Florence so I couldn t wait to get started on Rory I expected to like it a lot but I didn t expect to love it even than I loved Florence Ciye Cho is a wonderful and talented author who has a knack for creating the most fascinating worlds and the plots within those worlds Rory was one of the most unique premises I ve come across and was absolutely enchanting As with Cho s mermaid series the cover of Rory is gorgeous and represents the book very well Aurora or Rory was such a likeable character She was quirky and strong willed When she was taken to the land of Palladino and placed in a charm school with other young girls she was extremely out of place The other girls were charming graceful obedient and had a sort of classical beauty to them Rory was different not quite graceful or elegant and had her own charm and beauty that was unique but she didn t let herself be intimidated by the other girls I loved her curiosity and willingness to question everything even when it was rude to do so Why was she there What was the goal What did she need to do in order to get out The charm school was only the beginning of Rory s adventures in the land of ghosts and perhaps the easiest part I loved the direction of the plot and how nothing was predictable about it at all I never knew what would happen next or what everything meant I didn t have a bigger picture so I was right there with Rory trying to piece everything together and figure out her purpose and place in the world Would she escape would she pass the tests would she find someone she could trust I didn t expect anything that happened to happen but I loved every second I didn t know what avenues would be explored next and if a moment of attraction terror wonder etc would be forgotten or later expanded upon or if Rory would get herself into trouble or be in the right place at the right time Rory surprised me so many times Her creativity and the way she put so much of herself into her hobby made me admire her I rooted for her the entire time and found her to be so caring and wary at the same time loyal and distrusting and completely challenging I couldn t figure out Martin Marius the tinkering and inventive ghost and I was just as confused as Rory by the way the ghost cat Cookie seemed to describe him and think of him I loved the other characters especially Cookie Everyone was delightful in their own ways whether they were delightfully terrifying strange or sweet I won t spoil anything that happens after the charm school but the second half of the book was my favorite The ending was spectacular and I m already impatiently waiting on the second book Rory is a must read for anyone who enjoys fantasy fairy tale type of worlds magic or any kind of adventure While it was darker in the sense that it dealt with ghosts and death it was also light and full of wondrous things like lanterns of honey with glowing dragonflies and hot air balloons in the sky It was creative magical inventive and ultimately dazzling I can t contain it into just one genre Even though I praise the story so much for being descriptive it isn t overly so or hard to read I was immersed in the details wanting to see touch and taste the things that Rory was sensing Ciye Cho is such a talented author His worlds are enchanting and the plots within them don t disappoint I cannot gush enough about this book or his other ones and I feel like he is so underrated I don t hear near enough people talking about his books I love how his stories are YA fantasy just as I d want it but so descriptive new magical and unpredictable They are like a breath of fresh air when I need it most. Rory gilmore young adult books Review originally published at Love Literature Art and Reason book review blog Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1 Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1 I have many conflicting thoughts about this book On the one hand I think Ciye Cho has an incredible imagination and I really enjoyed the playful tone of this story On the other hand there were a few things that held me back from really falling in love with this book Let me break it down into some lists The Good Stuff I was initially intrigued by the synopsis which told me that Rory is a baker um yay and there was plenty of pastry fun to be found in this book All the talk of cakes and cookies made me happy and there s a dream kitchen that had me giddy with excitement The story was interesting and a lot of fun At times I was reminded of Alice in Wonderland because of all the strange vibrant people and scenes in this book There is a talking cat in this book and I don t really think I m spoiling anything by telling you this He is no doubt one of the best characters in the book and probably one of the most fleshed out Every scene with this cat made me smile or giggle The world of Palladino is quite imaginative and a lot of fun to picture in one s mind Cho s background as a graphic designer is evident here because there are so many times where I just thought to myself Oh cool There is plenty of humor I found Rory to be an amusing narrator and often her inner thoughts would make me snicker because she was so snarky I could relate to her a lot of the time Um the cover It actually fits the story perfectly and gasp even depicts a scene in the book Imagine that Again this is definitely a perk considering that the author is a graphic designer Have you seen the covers for his other books Also gorgeous The Not as Good Stuff Remember how I mentioned the baking parts There were also several times where I was left grumbling to myself Now perhaps I m just a bit of a pastry snob so I did try to keep an open mind I won t go into detail contact me elsewhere if you must know but there were several things that really made me question or doubt the author s knowledge of pastrycraft It wasn t horrible but again maybe I m just a snob The need for editing Now don t get me wrong it s not awful or I wouldn t have read the whole thing I think my issue is just that this book has so much potential to be amazing to be a 5 star book for me but it fell short Amazingly this is the first indie I ve read in which I noticed less than 5 actual typos or grammatical errors which is obviously a good thing However this one also seems to have less sophisticated writing than I prefer You may or may not have noticed me griping about the amount of sentences I counted that began with That s when while reading this book Sigh I wish the writing had been pushed to the next level You know how they say show don t tell when giving advice to writers Oh friends I wish so badly that this book had gotten attention in this department So much of the narration included short sentences that just told me what was happening And then right when I was about to sigh in frustration there d be this paragraph that rose above the rest and I could almost feel myself really inside the story And then it would dip again Final ThoughtsIn the end I did enjoy Rory and I am definitely looking forward to the sequel But I think this is one example of a good book that could have been turned into an amazing book That being said if anything about Rory intrigues you I definitely recommend giving it a shot especially if you like baking and cats NOTE I also want to clarify how much I enjoyed the book despite the few negatives Please see my comment reply to Shanelle for Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1 A GlanceStarted out so interesting then I just got bored and felt annoyed by the end The GoodIf you were going to read Rory for one reason it would be for the unique insanely interesting concept This is like no other story you have ever read This is not your typical ghost story Rory is all kinds of dark beautiful and creepy I straight up got the chills for half this book A person can go crazy trying to imagine all the secrets that have yet to be revealed in this book Expect good action drama mystery galore and mesmerizing magic The first half was the best part of the book I haven t bitten my nails in years but I did while reading this book I never knew what was going to happen Some of these characters were so evil so horrible and some trick you into thinking they are nice but they would stab their own mother in the back Then there was those few who showed compassion and it made my heart melt Oh I wish I wish the second half never happened The BadThe first half was great no complaints but the second half ruined it all for me The plot gets confusing I had no idea where any of this was going and not in a good way For the second half Rory became the errand girl for Martin a Ghost Lord Yeah not so fun to read about When the plot took this 180 but the second half was the death of my interest Not recommended QuotesIt all happens so fast The creature grabs me with his dark hands His fingers wrap around my waist like thick metal wires I freeze A gust of wind rushes around me as the giant wings rise higher But before I can pull away the wings arc downward to propel the demon into the air I open my mouth but no sound escapes from my throat I can t move as the demon lifts me up This isn t happening I think to myself This isn t real. Rory mcilroy She pauses and her face takes on a cold light At last she says Yes so you were However I suggest that you work hard to fit in inside my castle She smiles then adds softly That is if you wish to remain here in one piece Free book from author for honest review Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1 I adore Ciye Cho s mermaid series Florence and Luminaire so when he asked me to review his new book Rory I was definitely intrigued Then I saw the gorgeous cover and I just knew this was one book I had to read And Ciye did not disappoint Rory is just as fun and stunning as I hoped it would beEighteen year old cake decorator Rory lives a wary life All her life her mother warned her about the demons in the dark that snatch girls away and take them to a place they can t escape Rory of course never believed her mother that is until a demon with colorful glass wings almost captured her one dark evening Rory s mother saved her life but at the expense of her sanity And on another dark night Rory is successfully captured by the winged demon and taken to Palladino a city of ghosts In Palladino Rory like other captured human girls is trained to be a lady and eventual companion to one of the Ruling Lords. Rory gilmore young adult books What I love most about Ciye Cho s books is his imaginative and beautiful storytelling and Rory is definitely both imaginative and beautiful Cho has created such an enthralling and original take on ghosts and the afterlife in Rory I ve never encountered a world of ghosts and premise quite like this one Cho once again excels at vivid layered world building The wondrous city of Palladino is laid out and crafted with such fantastic detail and it is eerily enchanting in the most thrilling way Cho is so great at creating worlds that have the perfect balance of whimsy beauty and darkness and Palladino is a shining example We don t get to explore all of Palladino in Rory but the places Cho does take us particularly Cavendish Castle and the Jade Castle are bewitching and intriguing with their unexpected nooks and crannies And I look forward to discovering and exploring of Palladino in future books. Kindle royalty plan Another thing I love about Cho s books is his ability to create such well developed heroines Rory is super relatable capable witty and equal parts strong vulnerable brave and impetuous She feels real and is easy to root for I like her a lot and can t wait to watch her grow even as a heroine There is one very minor thing that I found annoying about Rory and that s her overuse of the word alasbut again this is just a small silly issue and definitely does not distract from her awesomeness There are several great supporting characters all well developed and intriguing including a faceless winged demon a talking cat and a charmingly gruff Ruling Lord I do however wish some of the supporting characters background information and history were explored in depth but hopefully is learned in future books There are only slight subtle romantic elements which I totally didn t mind in this first book and I m excited to see where all the possible romantic entanglements might go. Rory gilmore young adult books Rory s journey in Palladino takes her and us readers to some unexpected and twisty places I really enjoyed discovering this ghost city with Rory uncovering all its dark secrets and places of breathtaking beauty. Rory kramer MY FINAL THOUGHTS Rory has everything I ve come to expect from and admire about Ciye Cho s books a great heroine stunning world building and a wonderfully imaginative story Cho is a smart and highly entertaining storyteller and Rory kept me captivated from beginning to end Readers looking for a different kind of ghostly tale should definitely give Rory a read Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1 Far beyond heaven earth and hell is a city known as Palladino a place ruled by ghosts and filled with demons magic and all sorts of darkly beautiful things A city where no one can ever escape Eighteen year old Rory is a cake decorator who makes stunning confections But no amount of frosting or miracles can save her when a demon kidnaps her and carries her to Palladino Here Rory ends up in a deadly charm school where young women are forced to become companions for the Ghost Lords And for her to survive Rory must become everything that she isn t graceful elegant and perfect But nothing is what it seems in Palladino Not the magic Not the ghosts And definitely not Martin Marius the bizarre Ghost Lord slash inventor who is drawn to Rory For amid a thousand machines and a hundred cats Martin holds a secret that could change everything A secret that could either free Rory or destroy her Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1 Rory is a cake decorator who gets taken by a demon into the land of Palladino where ghosts and gargoyles and other creatures live She is forced to train to be graceful and proper so that she can be auctioned off to a ghost lord While she goes along with the training in order to survive Rory s mother constantly warns her about demons and being out after dark yet we never find out how her mom even knew about these creatures or why she would suspect that they would come after Rory The world building was something that I did like Cho creates a very vivid world filled with castles and hot air balloons and an array of ghost and creatures The whole ghost ballerina thing was kind of strange and I really didn t get the purpose of the girls having lessons on posture and how to hold a fan when supposedly the ghost lords only want them for their memories but the whole concept of the story was a very original idea Overall Rory was a bit of a strange book that was lacking in some areas but had great world building and an original story While it was not really for me I m sure others may enjoy it Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1 Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1 From The Sleepy Critic Book reviews from a sleep deprived maniac Click here for reviews Title RoryAuthor Ciye ChoRating 3. Rory kramer 0 out of 5 hoots I ll be honest The book had its awesome parts and it s not so awesome parts There were times where I wanted to hug my kindle until it exploded and times where I actually just wanted my kindle to explode. Rory kennedy Rory is a young adult fantasy which throws our protagonist from her disjointed life in the real world to a different realm altogether An ordinary girl with a love for cake designing one day Rory is suddenly abducted by a gargoyle and spirited away to Palladino a city of ghosts Here a Purgatory of sorts spirits who are not ready to advance to the afterlife create their own semblance of everyday life. Rory mcilroy Rory is one of many girls being trained to be consorts to the ghost lords in the city companions to provide memories and human comfort Palladino however hides many secrets and Rory is soon swept up in its mystique Who can she trust Who should she fear Is there a way out The idea of this all intrigued me A ghost city Ghost lords A school to train consorts Count me in There is no doubt that this concept is an original one. Rory mcilroy net worth I felt like the book was in terrible need of an editor Though the writing could be lovely at times it was drowned out by the technical errors and awkward sentence structures Take this sentence for example I can t remember the last time she said that and this saddens me I head down the lane and the sky is now a bright orange This makes me pause The sentences fall flat and lifeless and the repetition and choppiness of it kills any of the beautiful imagery it could have evoked With some editing however this book would have been considerably improved It just needs some polishing that s all. Science fiction fantasy series The plot for me too was a bit mediocre I felt like the whole story was only half developed By the time Rory is out of prep school the books is already almost halfway done In fact much of the book I felt was taken up by events pointless to the plot Things picked up towards the end but for me the reader I was left feeling disappointed I mean I liked the book It was addictive to read and certainly a page turner but at times it felt like large parts of itcould have been condensed Other important parts of the book on the other hand could have been expanded It s a bummer when you re reading a book that you enjoy and it s almost done with hardly any plot carried through The place in which it ended too was a bit awkward When I finished the story I felt like it wasn t complete There are going to be other books in the series certainly but I feel like any book that s in a series should be able to stand on its own This book unfortunately does not. Rory culkin From all the negative things I ve been griping about it probably sounds like I had a horrendous seizure inducing time reading this but that s completely untrue Like I said earlier writing errors aside this book is gripping. Science fiction fantasy series The setting is mystical and intriguing Ghost castles Count me in and the characters are pretty well developed overall Rory was a bit too perfect at times but she was pretty likeable in general Now that I think about it how did she even win out agains the other girls in the first place She awed everyone and became the object of their envy despite being not pretty and completely disadvantaged She definitely has an invincibility factor about her But anyways Unlike so many other YA heroines out there Rory actually felt real She was hardworking tough and fun loving and her name earns the book an extra 100 points I freaking love her name. Rory gilmore young adult books And Martin Ah Martin our ghost lord love interest He s also different from so many stereotypical YA characters and I love that He s not the broody dark I love you but I can t have you type of guy many authors seem to throw into their stories as a quota He s quirky smart and a bit socially awkward and the kissing scene is so cute and awkward that I might have died a little inside when I read it. Rory kramer Cookie Martin s talking ghost cat is also a favorite He reminds me of some old cartoon cat though it s hard to imagine that a cat would say such human things even if it could talk but ah whatever He s adorable Maybe being a ghost has made him human Idk. Rory feek Overall I give this story three hoots While it is wonderfully unique with interesting new concepts and archetype breaking characters it is also riddled with editing errors and a poor plot structure This could easily be fixed however with the help of a good editor. Science fiction fantasy series If you re interested in paranormal settings finishing schools cute ghost lords talking cats and likeable female protagonists with totally cray cray cake decorating abilities this is the book for you Go check it out if you re interested And thank you once to Mr Ciye Cho for the free copy and for his limitless patience as I tried to upload this book review As for me I m going to return to my daily dose of procrastination Thanks for tuning in guys Even though this isn t a radio Or is it DUM DUM DUM Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1 Disclosure I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. Rory clements books in order I really enjoyed the two other books I ve read by Ciye Cho so when I was approached to read and review this one I couldn t resist Rory follows the title character as she discovers the secret world of Palladino a land where ghosts train girls to be auctioned off to the Ruling Lords This may be a book about ghosts but it was like no other ghost story I ve ever read And I loved that about it The book starts off in quite a dark place as we re introduced to Rory We learn her mother is in a psychiatric unit because of the hallucinations she has Only Rory knows they re read The opening few chapters definitely had me gripped and there was a lot of suspense I really loved seeing Rory s worries and fears about her mother Soon the story takes a huge twist and we land in Palladino a heaven like universe filled with ghosts and magic This is where the book truly becomes something unique I adored the world building because you get to see all this crazy magical stuff and this beautiful landscape filled with castles and hot air balloons It s very fantastical and whimsical and just carries you away It felt very Alice in Wonderland esque and Lewis Carroll s story is actually referenced several times There was a great focus on dreams and imagination as well which I loved If you like that kind of wonderful imaginative setting for a book then I think you ll love Rory Rory as a character was very likable hopefully in the next book particularly Rory s neighbour Jai who is mentioned quite often but who you learn very little about I d also love to know of Rory s mother s backstory The plot itself had several parts to it I probably enjoyed the first half the most as Rory adjusts to life in Palladino and prepared for the unveiling Some of my favourite scenes were the lessons she s put through by the ghost mistresses where she has to learn to walk elegantly and make magical dust tea that stirs up your emotions The second half becomes a lot about the characters she meets there I really enjoyed getting to know about Martin as he seemed to be a character with a lot of depth and the relationship between him and Rory was fascinating to watch develop It took a little while to get to the mystery that really drove that second half of the book but once you get there it was worth it 1 This was a slightly bizarre unusual and charming book which made me think of Alice in Wonderland. EPub rory mcilroy Rory is an 18 year old girl with a mother in a psychiatric hospital All her life her mother believed in demons who take young girls away in the dark of night and made Rory walk around with a torch and a knife and stay home after dark. Rory gilmore young adult books One day Rory can t escape the dark and she is taken away to the ghost town of Palladino where young girls are groomed and educated to serve The Ruling Lords and give them their memories so the monsters will remember how to be alive. Rory gallagher The only thing Rory wants to do is to survive and escape but her bravery boldness and her talent as a cake maker attract attention of two of The Ruling Lords One is Herve The Hunter a dark sadistic monster who tortures and kills anything surrounding him and the other is Martin Marius a whimsical mad hatter an inventor and a dreamer with a penchant for cats. Rory mcilroy net worth Only one of them can set her free but she is stuck in a tug of war between two enemies in a plot bigger than her escape plot that threatens the existence of Palladino the town of ghosts. Rory kramer I really enjoyed Ciye Cho s writing It s simple but but at the same time whimsical and beautiful Also you can t help but fall in love with the descriptions of Palladino and with Rory s best friend a ghost cat Cookie Recommended Rory The Ghosts of Palladino 1

Rory (The Ghosts of Palladino, #1) By Ciye Cho
English
347
Kindle Edition
rory mcilroy
rory calhoun
rory gallagher
rory kennedy
rory culkin
rory mcilroy net worth
rory gilmore
rory feek new wife
rory feek response to daughter
book rory stewart
books rory gilmore read
book oryx lounge doha
book oryx lounge
book oryx hotel doha
book royal caribbean cruise
Rory (The Ghosts of Palladino, #1)Ciye Cho lives in Australia and works as a graphic designer He writes YA novels in his free time and his head is often lost in the clouds or some place far from reality.

,

Rory kramer

It felt completely separate from the first half From here I was bored out of my mind. Rory gilmore young adult books With her mother out of the picture you guessed it the demon comes back for Rory and takes her to Palladino Basically a purgatory she can t escape: Rory feek And other than the very beginning of the book Rory seems to completely forget her desire to escape ghost land. Rory feek This is just the beginning of my issues with the book sadly, Ebook orientaction Plot 1 out of 5Characters I m sad to say that the character I most liked was the character I was most supposed to hate. Kindle royalty plan 35% or 70 Begging your pardon Lady Cavendish but I didn t come here I was taken.Personally he amused me.I did however have a few qualms about the story.Full review also posted here on TotalTeenFiction