Setting and general characterization are nice enough but beside the typos some are kind of hilarious and grammar mistakes there is no erotic tension build up nor a consistent character development I could not see the attraction between the leads growing and turning into real passion it was surely told but not proficiently conveyed. S how can a Texan ranch be world famous 28

Raunchy Ranch Hands By Riley Colton

English

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Kindle Edition

Greg didn t expect anything from his summer internship at the world famous Cox Ranch but hard work and furthering his college degree in agriculture Having spent his entire life as a straight man he certainly did not expect to find romance among the other young men of the internship But the desires are irresistible and Greg spends his nights fantasizing about his work partner Roger a sexy Latino from Houston He tries to hide his feelings never before having imagined himself gay but on an extended trip deep into the untraveled backcountry with Roger those feelings come to a head Alone in some of the most rugged country on the face of the earth will the object of his desire spurn his attention Raunchy Ranch Hands.

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A good deal of effort many good ideas and some neat dialogues are fine things per se but still not enough to deliver a satisfying erotic story, This one is longer than the usual porn stuff the many attempts at fleshing out betraying the ambition of making an erotic romance out of it.P