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I am eighteen years old Three weeks ago I had never had sex of any kind except with my right hand Now I can suck and fuck with the best of them At the tail end of a brutal war the spoils go to the victors and well endowed Evan is a magnificent prize indeed Unlike his other school friends who are fucked by three or soldiers on the night of the Invasion Evan is taken to Captain Ramon s quarters and is treated well While held captive Evan learns that their side has surrendered and that they have become an occupied territory He also learns that their invaders have sinister plans for him and his friends Evan is turned into sex toy used to entertain the bored troops And as if his life wasn t complicated enough he has to deal with pleasing the mercurial Captain Ramon falling in love with his fellow sex toy Jesus and juggling his feelings for his best friend Tom Can friendship pleasure and love survive this Invasion Submissive InvasionI was born in Hertfordshire about 25 miles North West of London I joined the Royal Navy straight from school did four years at engineering college and then went to sea for three years in destroyers I took a commission after that and joined the Fleet Air Arm as a helicopter pilot I was married had two kids and now have four grandchildren and one great grandson I left the navy in 1970 and became a civil pilot which I did until I retired at 55 I started and ran a business in London for seven years before retiring to Antigua I lost my lifes savings in the Stanford Ponzi Scheme so we manage now on my pensions which are quite small but hell we live in Paradise so it cant be all bad. Submission invitation I discovered I was gay when I was 35 yes I know I was born in Hertfordshire about 25 miles North West of London I joined the Royal Navy straight from school did four years at engineering college and then went to sea for three years in destroyers I took a commission after that and joined the Fleet Air Arm as a helicopter pilot I was married had two kids and now have four grandchildren and one great grandson I left the navy in 1970 and became a civil pilot which I did until I retired at 55 I started and ran a business in London for seven years before retiring to Antigua I lost my life s savings in the Stanford Ponzi Scheme so we manage now on my pensions which are quite small but hell we live in Paradise so it can t be all bad. Submission invitation I discovered I was gay when I was 35 yes I know ridiculous I had been divorced for two years by then so no one got hurt emotionally I met Rafe in 1980 and my whole family fell in love with him so no angst for me at all. Submission invitation org site_link I found this story a bit odd There s a lot of sex with multiple partners both non con as well as consensual Some of the non con scenes were quite graphic The prisoners are used and abused by the troops shortly after their capture. Submission invitation There are four main characters at play here First is the Captain Ramon the one who chooses to keep 18 year old Evan as his POW slave He treats him well in the beginning but it quickly turns to Ramon using Evan as a pawn by orchestrating gay sex scenes starring Evan and his fellow prisoners as entertainment for his troops After Ramon sees Evan s friendship with a fellow prisoner Tom and recognizing Tom is extremely well endowed as are all of the men Ramon chooses for the shows he forces Evan to do a show with him After they remain friends and lovers Then Ramon introduces Jesus pronounced with an H a small young man who is also blessed cursed with a giant cock He and Evan must perform for the troops but Ramon uses the two against each other Unbeknownst to Evan Ramon refuses to perform the last task of peeing in Tom s mouth which defiance causes horrific consequences to Jesus Ramon leaves Jesus in Evan s care assuming Jesus will be dead by morning He somehow survives with what little care Evan is able to give and the two begin a relationship. Submission invitation More manipulations by Ramon abound wherein Evan must agree to happily be with him in exchange for allowing Evan to spend time with Tom and Jesus Tom and Evan have decided they will remain friends as Evan and Jesus have fallen in love though they do spend time as a threesome. Submission invitation One of the main things that drove me a little nuts was the use of the word bottom for anything from ass to anus For some reason this just kept pulling me out of the story I had a difficult time with this being serious every time the word was used. Submission invitation While I did enjoy this story it often felt as though something was missing No big plot holes or anything major like that but ere and there things got choppy and I think I just had a hard time acclimating myself to this world 73 1: Submission invitation If you d like to give me comments or suggestions to any of my books feel free to shoot me an email at chris_johns awesomeauthors. Submission invitation 5 starsugh This is going on the SHKB shelf I shoulda known better Pure porny porn PWP With nothing new or original to redeem it 73